Decide on three reasons, or points, to support the thesis you came up
with for homework last week. Start thinking of ways you might organize
these reasons within your argument. Begin getting some of your thoughts
down, working toward your first draft. Type your claim and three reasons
and upload along with your working theses to your Blogs by Sunday night
for Writers’ Notebook points.
Cause and effect -Schools should help children learn how to prevent childhood obesity, we will have a healthier future generation.
Fact or definition
Child Obesity has more than doubled in the last ten years, what can schools to do to help prevent this epidemic?
Policy or solution
Child
Obesity is on the and schools need to help solve this epidemic by
providing nutritious meals at the cafeteria, offer more opportunity's
for exercise and teach nutrition.
Hi, Suzanne; this is a good start but, again, make sure these are all statements, not questions. also try to condense these points into a fluid, 1-2 sentence thesis statement. 10/10
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