Saturday, April 20, 2013

Three Points

Decide on three reasons, or points, to support the thesis you came up with for homework last week. Start thinking of ways you might organize these reasons within your argument. Begin getting some of your thoughts down, working toward your first draft. Type your claim and three reasons and upload along with your working theses to your Blogs by Sunday night for Writers’ Notebook points.



Cause and effect -Schools should help children learn how to prevent childhood obesity, we will have a healthier future generation.


Fact or definition
Child Obesity has more than doubled in the last ten years, what can schools to do to help prevent this epidemic?

Policy or solution
Child Obesity is on the and schools need to help solve this epidemic by providing nutritious meals at the cafeteria, offer more opportunity's for exercise and teach nutrition.


1 comment:

  1. Hi, Suzanne; this is a good start but, again, make sure these are all statements, not questions. also try to condense these points into a fluid, 1-2 sentence thesis statement. 10/10

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